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You messed a few lyrics up.

 

It's "this is what happens when wings separate," not "when we separate."

And "we can't be flown," not "formed."

And a couple other minor errors that were probably intentional.

 

 

I really liked the piano, and most of the vocals. The guitar is a bit much for the song. I think it calls for a cleaner sound.

 

It's well put-together, though.

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